*help*

Ok - so i mentioned previously that I've been working on girl!ianto stuff and that I'd written a fic then abandoned it to go back and try again.

However - since then have been thinking and was wondering if any of you wonderful lot would like to help - so I'm posting said fic (it's missing the previously planned end scenes - but it still works) - to see what people think

Comments on what does/doesn't work, any characterization fails, etc are very very welcome and will be much appreciated.

Fic is set around Torchwood season 1 - mainly ep 1.08 - with some dialogue from episodes included.

( 8,500word girl!ianto fic behind here )